Question

Please help, I will give a medal :)




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Answer 1

Original Fable:
A Lion asleep in his lair was woken up by a Mouse running over his face. Losing his temper he seized it with his paw and was about to kill it. The Mouse, terrified, piteously entreated him to spare its life saying he could help him in return someday. The idea of so insignificant a creature ever being able to do anything for him amused the Lion so much that he laughed aloud, and good-humoredly let it go. But the Mouse's chance came, after all. One day the Lion got entangled in a net which had been spread for game by some hunters, and the Mouse heard and recognized his roars of anger and ran to the spot. Without more ado it set to work to gnaw the ropes with its teeth, and succeeded before long in setting the Lion free.
1. Using what you now know about the authors’ tools, rate these aspects of the original fable on a scale of 1 to 5.
rate the fable
Used Frequently >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> Not Used
Varied sentence structure 5 4 3 2 1
Vivid Imagery 5 4 3 2 1
Word Choice 5 4 3 2 1

Answer 2

this seems more of your opinion..

Answer 3

yeah, I put 4, 5, 5. but I need help with this.... @beccaboo333

Answer 4

2. How can you improve the fable? In addition to sentence structure, choose one of these Author's Tool Box tools that will help you add detail and interest to the story:
Sentence Structure—vary the type and combination of sentences to create interest
AND
Check the other tool you will use to improve the fable
_Word Choice—add vocabulary that shapes the characters, sets the mood, and expresses a clear tone—consider using some of your rescued vocabulary words into your revised fable.
_ Imagery—use details that touch on the senses, making the story come alive for the reader

Answer 5

I don't get that

Answer 6

what would you do to make sentences, words, and imagery seem better

Answer 7

rewrite it?

Answer 8

no, just give opinions on what would make it better

Answer 9

oh, ok. but I don't really see anything that needs fixing..

Answer 10

think of something basic then? or write why you feel nothing should be changed

Answer 11

ok thanks :)

Answer 12

welcome