Question

This is a bit scary ha

Some may say the end is near

That we, the human race, are soon dead to all ears

That the exhumation of the world and its all around creation will fall apart with a single tear

As if it never had an impact on thousands of peers

As if it’s existence was nothing to be cheered

The wars, the fears, the triumphs lost in utmost despair

Darkness spreading like dust in the air

Destruction does not care

It will toss what you love and light it a blare

Scream out in the night for the losses cannot be bared

Soon, no one will care..

Answer 1

For blare - I couldn't rhyme the right word and was trying tot hunk of another..

Answer 2

*to think haha

Answer 3

I think I'm going to change some things. This was my first go at writing it..

Answer 4

i think Its good it is well written , and is not the least bit scary ... at least to me its not lol

Answer 5

Oh aha I hadn't meant the poem was scary, I meant putting it up for others to read :P

Answer 6

It's very good ^_^

Answer 7

Thank you to both of you(:
@KattGirl14 @crazycathatesmath14

Answer 8

your very welcome !!! =^.^=

Answer 9

I think it sounds dark, somewhat pessimistic. I think it's pretty good though. Sounds like judgement day

Answer 10

Thank you(: I appreciate the truth:P

Answer 11

"toss what you love or strip it bare" a possibility

Answer 12

Thank you very much! I would have loved to use that but I already sent it in:/

Answer 13

Nice. I love the pessimistic feel. You just never know when your life will end. Live it to the fullest!