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OpenStudy (anonymous):

could someone help me edit this?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

OpenStudy (jagatuba):

Need to know your grade level please. I don't want to give university level feedback on a 10th grade paper. :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I revised it a bit, hope it is not too late. Still, check for some grammar errors or run on sentences.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

its a 10th grade paper.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

This is the newer one.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@jagatuba

OpenStudy (dylangr1997):

I like it

OpenStudy (anonymous):

but does it need any editing.

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