Question

Check my story for english and tell me what you think please!

Answer 1

Where is your story?? You can post a link or attach your file :)

Answer 2

i am one moment

Answer 3

kk sorry :3

Answer 4

i had to rewrite the story of rapunzel as a flashback

Answer 5

It seems to be a good story ,I have read the first part, The content is great but you should pay attention to some mistakes that may confuse the reader ! Nice effort

Answer 6

thanks