Question

Do you like my song lyrics? Any suggestions for improving?
Here they are:
Come back home.I made mistakes. I’ll live again. Time moves slowly. I forget why you left. I don’t know why I care. Live again. To live – life is a mystery. I hardly realize I breathe. Suffocated. When I forgot myself you’d remember me. Now you’re gone. Now I’m lost. Yet I know exactly where I am. Come back home. Pray remember me. Regrets. That’s all I’m left with. Live your life. Have your dream. I’m stuck remembering the memories. Bittersweet. Now you've left me. Sure I was wrong. I made mistakes. You were the only thing that kept me going. You’re my life. And now that the memories are fading… What have I left to live for. Come back home. Before I make my last mistake.

Kind of a pop/folk/electronic tune. I really don't know.

Answer 1

yeah there good!

Answer 2

Thanks!

Answer 3

its really good :) is that the whole song , or just the first verse??

Answer 4

very good