Question

Help please, will reward!
I wrote this poem for creative writing, I need help revising and editing anything wrong for my draft. Can you help me find anything wrong with this poem?

Answer 1

It never complains when I mount that big seat
Or take it out in that hot Texas heat.

It takes me anywhere I want to go,
It takes me places I know I shouldn’t go,
To stir up that mud and have some fun.

Across the river, through the brush you were there with me.
Through thick and thin, through mud and dirt you were there for me.
You’re the fearless one, you’re my lifelong mudbug.

Don’t get our my way, were not here to play,
You hear us coming, gassin’ it as we go,
Like lions in the desert, hear us roar.

While you’re 4x4 pure power digs deep thru the mud,
I’m holding on tight to you tightly.
Cause my four wheeler and me go together so perfectly.

Answer 2

It never complains when I mount that big seat
Or take it out in that hot Texas heat.

It takes me anywhere I want to go,
It takes me places I know I shouldn't go,
To stir up that mud and have some fun.

Across the river, through the brush you were there with me.
Through thick and thin, through mud and dirt you were there for me.
You’re the fearless one, you’re my lifelong mud-bug.

Don’t get out my way, we're not here to play,
You hear us coming, gassing it as we go,
Like lions in the desert, hear us roar.

While you’re 4x4 pure power digs deep through the mud,
I’m holding on to you tightly,
Because my four wheeler and me go together so perfectly.


I fixed the common grammar mistakes and what I thought was slightly incorrect but over all this was very nice in my opinion c: