My poem, any advice?

You don't know my feelings
You don't know the truth
You don't know what I've been through
H3ll and back because of you
You don't know me
You don't have the right to tell me
I can be anything I wanna be
Its my time to shine
To do the rights and wrongs of my own life
You taught me life is like h3ll
The louder I yell
The more it hurts
And burns
So this is the last time I will say it
And this time, It is me walking out
Good bye

Question

My poem, any advice?


You don't know my feelings
You don't know the truth
You don't know what I've been through
H3ll and back because of you
You don't know me
You don't have the right to tell me
I can be anything I wanna be
Its my time to shine
To do the rights and wrongs of  my own life
You taught me life is like h3ll
The louder I yell
The more it hurts
And burns
So this is the last time I will say it
And this time, It is me walking out
Good bye

anonymous · Answer

This is really good... i could feel the emotion... good job! xD

anonymous · Answer

Thanks hun! <3