Question

I have made couple of songs, including rap. Any Opinion?

Answer 1

"Absence of Love"

Sometimes, you can only feel something by it's absence.
By the empty space it leaves behind.

Sometimes, you can only seal your love by abstinence.
By picking up the broken heart she left behind.

Still think, no wonder i came upon you by accident.
A Coincidence, that our lives twined.

Everyone trying hard to make me stop, so adamant.
Never thought In love, i would be so blind.

Oh my thoughts, so valiant.
Tried to stop love from hijacking my mind.

Never thought you would be so brilliant.
In accomplishing to make my life grind.

In a matchless fight of power and love.
Such insignificant heart is mine to glove.

Before I whisper in your heart my fond adieu.
Just wanted to say I love you.

Answer 2

*n* Right in the feels buddy.....right in the feels.

Answer 3

I guess it's Good then :)

Answer 4

Your darn right it is Q_Q

Answer 5

"Hopeless Romantic"

Imma Hopeless Romantic
with a Dirty mind
and Tad Frantic
my thoughts, in it I declined

(thought to myself)

Sitting nowhere, living nowhere
Looks like it's South Atlantic
I just might need some thanksgiving flair
Or else, hope for some manic

One thing was left c0cking
Went for my gun, oh my
I was assured, quite astounding
before held the trigger, eyes went dry

my mind, it's thoughts echo sounding
did what i had to do, started vying
u wouldn't believe, nerves pounding

(BAM)

I was after all done plying

Answer 6

Good as well, I especially liked the first paragraph

Answer 7

Im sure you have heard "Call me Maybe", here is a Parody :P

"Call me maybe (Parody)"

I threw a kid in the well
Don't ask me i'll never tell
I will regret this in hell
but he was in my way

I'll trade my soul for a wish
Damnation and sin for your kiss
I wasn't looking for this
But you were in my way

You glare was holding
Ripped spleen, skin was rolling
dark night, blood was flowing
where you think you're going, baby?

Hey I just killed you
Im Fcking crazy
but they'll never find you
so rot there maybe

Answer 8

I was avin a giggle m8

Answer 9

(｡◕‿◕｡) Well, this is the last one!

"Cut Throat Competition"

Speed speed this break neck speed
Lust of Power,never ending greed
A hectic race to leave behind
to crush and tread all human kind
not good, not better only the best
to steal a march over all the rest
to snatch or grab from other folk
to cheat and dodge under pious cloak
to serve your end to cut others throat
to drive your rivals to keep you afloat
to all mean wishes to be a slave
to chase no matter what even into the grave
this matchless age, this modern mind
is a shameful blot on name of man kind

Answer 10

You sir, have creative talent.

Answer 11

'tis be good

Answer 12

@tester97
Eminem Songs! <3

P.S: There is also a Scroll Bar at the bottom :D

Answer 13

Pls, Two Steps From Hell is what's good. (⌐■_■)

Answer 14

OMG I LOVE YOU DISCOOOOOOO ♥ your music taste is impeccable

Answer 15

<3
I might recommend you a Wallpaper! :)
This is the same one I have...

Answer 16

honestly tho Cinderella man and space bound and going through changes FTW!

Answer 17

Oh Dayum!
Cinderella Man! SO AWESOME!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!

Answer 18

wut

Answer 19

Listen to:
"Love the Way you lie"
if you haven't already...

Answer 20

I listen to the Nightcore of it, because Eminem is cut out in it since he ruins the song.

Answer 21

/inb4 i hate rap

Answer 22

Also "No Love"

Answer 23

LoL, i just listened to "Space Bound" and "Going through Changes"
Had to find them in my playlist, i have about 186 songs so don't read the names when listening. These both are one of my Favs

Answer 24

It took me forever but this is my screensaver xD

http://agentsniffles97.tumblr.com/post/73251279116/when-your-parents-ask-if-you-did-it

Answer 25

LawL!!!!!!

Answer 26

DISCO WHYYYYYYY CANT I PLAY THE SONGSSSSS?!?!?!?

Answer 27

THE SONGS THAT I HAVE????????????????

Answer 28

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Answer 29

HOW ABOUT.....
IT'S JUST A PICTURE!!!!!

Answer 30

:P

Answer 31

oh...

Answer 32

I KNEWWWW THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 33

CHECK MY ASK.FM BACKGROUND!!!!!!!!!!!
http://ask.fm/SyedOanHussainShirazi

Answer 34

Love is evol spell it backwards i'll show ya............

Answer 35

who knows?...maybe a frontal lobotomy is the best answer

Answer 36

It must be the ganja, im sure. Its the marijuana thats creeping upon me while Im so high
Maybe it's the Henny that has gotten in me? Whatevers got into me I don't mind...

Answer 37

The spinning drama when it comes to lyrics and pennin' some
Starting from scratch and then endin' up at the end enough
Capable of bringin' a Pulitzer, strong believe a bullet's a
Titanium, cranium that's full of surprise

Answer 38

You can try and read my lyrics off of this paper before I lay em. But you wont take the sting out these words before I say em...

Answer 39

Cause ain't no way I'mma let you stop me from causing mayhem
When I say I'mma do something I do it, I don't give a damn
What you think i did this for me

Answer 40

come to think bout it, his name was.... it was you. DAMN!

Answer 41

#r.i.p. STAN

Answer 42

Dude d12 and Eminem are having a comeback soon o.o

Answer 43

O.O dude that's what i heard

Answer 44

shaking that retriceon the floor, bumpin and grindin that pole
the way shes grindin that pole, i think im losing control

Answer 45

crack a bottle right?

Answer 46

so crack a bottle, and let your body wobble...dont act like a snobby model you just hit the lotto

Answer 47

There used to be a time when you could just say a rhyme
And wouldn't have to worry about one of your people dyin'

Answer 48

dammit, i forgot the song name... in which Eminem is in the jail or something...
ANYONE KNOW???

Answer 49

Im browsing through my Playlist, still can't remember the song

Answer 50

lyrics?

Answer 51

are you talking about "drop the soap" or "you dont know"

Answer 52

YEA!!!! "You don't know"!!! Found it

Answer 53

Can't get tired from listening to this...

Answer 54

XD i meant drop the world
and ya thats a good song 50 wounds good in it

Answer 55

"drop the soap" means something else (ಠ⌣ಠ)

Answer 56

~*O*~ all these cds

Answer 57

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cmRVb6v1W28

Answer 58

Alley, r those urs? o.o

Answer 59

No i wish tho :/

Answer 60

Tumblr bruh

Answer 61

disco did you get my pm?

Answer 62

Those CD's, look so smoooooth... ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) WANT WANT!

Answer 63

no thad...

Answer 64

NOW IF YOU DROP IT (what?) DONT PICK IT UP (what?) CUZ IF YOU DO ITS OPEN SEASON ON YOUR BUTT

Answer 65

Im sleepy! Well Bai...

Answer 66

bye

Answer 67

Bye disco :) ♥

Answer 68

BAH-BAI! BOTH OF YA! <3

Answer 69

First of all imma boss i just wanna get that across

Answer 70

Really amzeing

Answer 71

good job bro

Answer 72

cool!

Answer 73

I will steal your songs! xD

Answer 74

Unfortunately they are Copyrighted already. Try stealing them, I'll sue you!

Answer 75

lol good work, youre a gifted poet!
ill be sure to purchase your first album ;)

Answer 76

i still hate rap more than anything :3

Answer 77

"Hopeless Romantic" is not a Rap though...

Answer 78

Even though I don't plan to go in Music industry...

And If someday, hopefully I make Music. It would be free, Music shouldn't have a price on it.

Answer 79

Then download it for free somewhere lol.

Answer 80

Hehe, whatchu think I do? :P

Answer 81

Pff, youtube-mp3.org is like the shiz-biz. :3