Question

Can someone proof read my paper

Answer 1

sure!

Answer 2

may you post it?

Answer 3

Oh sorry. I just saw the attach file part

Answer 4

lol that is ok

Answer 5

Please be very harsh. Tell me if it doesn't take sense or you just do not understand it.

Answer 6

make*

Answer 7

I will, lol you can copy and paste it or press attach a file

Answer 8

First off in the first paragraph it should say business partners not business partner.

Answer 9

also You used some alot. like instead of saying....
but what happens when these technological advancements are not used for the better and become a living nightmare for some? you could say...
but what happens when these technological advancements are not used for the better and become a living nightmare for an individual?

Answer 10

You may retype "They send them hateful messages, and post embarrassing things about them that it makes the person feel powerless and miserable because they do not know what to do. " as They send them hateful messages, and post embarrassing things about them that makes the person feel powerless and miserable because they do not know how to react. But that part is up to you

Answer 11

Because of the bullying the victim is going through(,)<- other students might also stay away from them because they do not want to be associated with them, thus leaving the victim to face all the hatred alone.

Answer 12

Before you continue I have a question. We turn in our papers through turnitin.com and it see if we plagiarize. It pops up every website that use the same words as me. So, since your re-typing do you think it will affect my paper?

Answer 13

Wow you should become a writer. This was amazing! can't wait to help with any other papers you have. I was drawn in the moment i read the first few words!!!

I am not sure if what I said to retype is on any other website. I thought it up myself. I would never try to get you into trouble. you may want to keep it the same just in case.

Answer 14

One more thing...
Also if it is made a law people who do end up breaking it would look foolish because their crime punishment would be something that was so easily avoidable that they would feel embarrassed and probably never do it
should change to...
Also if it is made a law people who do end up breaking it would look foolish because their punishment would be something that was so easily avoided that they would feel embarrassed and probably never do it again

Answer 15

no! not you. lol thank you. I mean my writing. You re-type my work and tell me what's wrong. So i am wondering if that website we turn it in through will match it up with you just re-typing it. Am i making sense? I do think I do?

Answer 16

I understand. I would leave it as what you have.

Answer 17

Is my refutation confusing?

Answer 18

refutation?

Answer 19

Oh I read one of my comments. I didn't mean to be bossy. It was a typo. I don't think I do is what I meant

Answer 20

My third to last paragraph

Answer 21

may you repost the file? My computer shut down and closed down your paper.

Answer 22

Oh. I had a quick question first

Answer 23

This website. Is it free?

Answer 24

yep

Answer 25

Last question, I am going off topic..And are the members like English majors because you are good at English.

Answer 26

no there are different subjects on here. I do good in all subjects. And Thank you!

Answer 27

Are you a student in college or highschool ? And I don't want to be creepy. I just want to know who's reading my paper. And please do not think I am being rude.

Answer 28

no I am in 8th grade on my way to 9th grade. I fully understand what you mean. Also I am in all Honors classes making all A's

Answer 29

also now will you repost the file? not trying to be rude just trying to see if I missed anything

Answer 30

Did you finish reading it already?

Answer 31

yes. just want to double check...don't want you to fail

Answer 32

I thank you, but I think it's okay now.

Answer 33

Do you know what a reconfirmation paragraph is? and parenthetical?

Answer 34

No I am sorry.

Answer 35

I am not trying to offend you, but I am a lot older than you and I though you were older and I am a senior in high school, and this is a college English class. So thank you for your help. Your a good person.

Answer 36

I am sorry if I disappointed you or was not as helpful as you thought. You are welcome and I wish I could have been more helpful...

Answer 37

Don't blame yourself. I mean you are very smart for an 8th grader. I mean how many 8th graders out there help people on this website? I know I didn't. This is my first time on this site.

Answer 38

Thanks. That means a lot. I try my best. I am serious about you becoming an author! you really have a gift!

Answer 39

Thanks. I'm somewhat of a smarty pants too. Have a nice life!

Answer 40

You too!

Answer 41

thanks for fanning me.lol

Answer 42

Your welcome.Just continue to do good in school. I mean are you the smartest in your class?

Answer 43

I ask too much questions. Forget it. It can be weird online. Take care.

Answer 44

lol. sorry was heading to bed