Question

Writing is a great thing for anyone to do. I want you all to give me your advice on this poem. Please?

Answer 1

this is great in my opinion
but @linda3 can give you advice ;p
she's a great writer too (^_^)

Answer 2

Thank you!

Answer 3

no problem, but linda is not online right now though :/

Answer 4

I will talk to her later then.

Answer 5

It's beautiful!!!!!!! Wow you are really good at writing, I felt like i was there- I think it's perfect the way it is :)

Answer 6

Thanks!

Answer 7

told ya ;p

Answer 8

yep!

Answer 9

I completely agree with @linda3. I'm also a writer and it's really good! I'd leave it as is. :)

Answer 10

Thank you!