Question

I WILL GIVE MEDALS - Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for any use of passive voice. Revise those sentences.
Write a short reflection paragraph on the revision process. Describe the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.

Answer 1

the paragraph - The telephone has improved into the cellular phone, which lets us communicate instantly without having to talk, but by texting. Texting has helped many people, you can keep in touch with your parents if you go to the movies to let them know it’s time to be picked up. As well as in cases of emergency’s when talking can injure you. Via text you can also know what bills you have to pay on what dates. The cellular phone is more than just a phone for some, but work!

Answer 2

@ganeshie8 @phi @mathstudent55 @AravindG @zepdrix @thomaster @radar

Answer 3

Medals shouldn't be used as prompts to answer. They should come naturally as a result of excellent-quality answers. Just saying.

Answer 4

@aurorablue01 Yes well people don't help out of the generosity of there hearts.

Answer 5

please help me!

Answer 6

please