Question

Can someone read what i have so far about the Red Scare news report for my English portfolio and tell me what else i can add into it?? Thanks ..

Answer 1

Attached file below

Answer 2

to be realistic, not many people here will have the time with helping you out with this.

Answer 3

Well thanks anyway i guess

Answer 4

alright, I would suggest saying "to the people of Russia" rather than "that of the people of Russian"

Answer 5

and then a comma before and after "if not millions" to add emphasis.

Answer 6

You also repeated 'chaotic' twice, causing it to lose emphasis.

Answer 7

maybe a semi-colon rather than a period after 'corpse' and before 'so chaotic'

Answer 8

what grade level is this

Answer 9

hello @XxRawrrxX

Answer 10

alright best of luck then

Answer 11

thanks so muchhh