Question

Tone?

Answer 1

It will help the reader connect with the story better. And the more evident the tone the more it builds on the story. Take this example.

She sat in the room, looking out the window.

The lonely girl sat wearily in the dark, gloomy room, staring out the window at the black, rainy skies.

Which one is better?

There you go :)

Answer 2

Thank you

Answer 3

No problem.