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OpenStudy (anonymous):

plz help Revise the following sentence to make it more interesting: The boy walked up to the girl and said “Hi.”

OpenStudy (anonymous):

The good looking boy with his skinny jeans and shaggy hair looking flawless as ever walked up to the girl who was wearing a cute yellow dress and heels with her hair tied up. His mouth opened slowly and words barely escaped his mouth as he was nervous. She stood up from the bench she was sitting on and stared into his eyes as he finally spoke. “Hi.” This was the only thing that came out of his mouth as he stared into the beauty that she was.

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