I need help writing a song about suicide and pain of being alone etc.....I need help, I will give a medal

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bakonloverk · Answer

Very deep topic. Do you have anything so far?

anonymous · Answer

That the pain is far ot great

anonymous · Answer

and that i just want to slip away...nice and quietly

bakonloverk · Answer

Dont give me the medal yet, idk if i can help

anonymous · Answer

Im not sure what else......I just know this song is for everyone in genral

bakonloverk · Answer

hmm okay is it about preventing suicide? or wanting to commit?

anonymous · Answer

Preventing.....

bakonloverk · Answer

hmm, any other ideas?

anonymous · Answer

I think I can help...I write poetry and music. Just give me a few and i will reply with at least PART of a song...

anonymous · Answer

Thanks

anonymous · Answer

No problem :)
I have some of it done so far...care to take a look and see how you like it?

anonymous · Answer

And if you don't mind me asking..you OBVIOUSLY live in Florida, but do you happen to live in Polk County or are in a TV Production class?

anonymous · Answer

duval county

anonymous · Answer

Ooh...well, I live in Polk County and I and In TV Productions and we have "districts" where we submit music videos, documentaries, short stories, etc. Just figured I would ask...Here it is:



Don’t give up just yet, 
We all go through hard time

I don’t want to say goodbye, 
And I care so please don’t cry

But when I stand here with you,
I see what could be so true

Please don’t leave me behind.
Because time cannot rewind

To the day that you choose
The stop fighting; to lose

I wish you would just listen,
To the loved ones here within

We are all here to help,
Help with what you’ve felt

Every now and then we, 
Decide to just give up
But please don’t go,
Just live it up

Your life is important,
You’re mean for something BIG

So push on through,
And I can help you live

anonymous · Answer

thanks

anonymous · Answer

No problem...would you like me to continue or is that fine...And do you like it or no?

anonymous · Answer

yes, please continuie

anonymous · Answer

Okay...I apologize for the delay, I was helping another person with their french homework lol Give me a few moments please.