Break

She sat alone,
alone at home where er screams were silent,
but her mind was violent.
Her insecurities hid deep inside,
and they did indeed eat her alive.
A tear rolled down her face as her heart began to race,
she
took a blade to her skin,
where her depression hid within'.
This went on for months, and and soon to be years,
til' she decided that the world around her was too tough,
she had had enough, she took a gun to her head,
congratulations society,
she is dead

Question

Break

She sat alone, 
alone at home where er screams were silent,
but her mind was violent.
Her insecurities hid deep inside,
and they did indeed eat her alive.
A tear rolled down her face as her heart began to race,
she
 took a blade to her skin,
where her depression hid within'.
This went on for months, and and soon to be years,
 til' she decided that the world  around her was too tough,
 she had had enough, she took a gun to her head, 
congratulations society,
she is dead

anonymous · Answer

We were given this poem to try and feel what the person who wrote it was feeling, my feelings toward this poem were not exactly what my teacher expected out of me. Tell me what you guys think about it. Giving out medals!

anonymous · Answer

I think the narrator is feeling that the world around her was pushing her to the edge. She began to cut herself then she thought had enough and she took her own life. She thought she was never good enough for anything and all her incurities made her hate herself. That what i gathered for the peom. Hope I helped :)