Question

What do you think of my thesis statement?
In William Shakespeare's Hamlet, Prince Hamlet, because of his rash and impulsive actions and his personal debate about life and death, unwillingly present himself as the main reason for the tragic avalanche of events that ultimately lead to his downfall.

Answer 1

It's very good, however, grammatically, "present" should be "presented" or "presents", depending on which tense you are using. :)