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Answer 1

like every THING in this world ... feelings vanish as WELL
heart dies as ppl... you and me will BE gone forever ..
and the love you promised me to hold ...
you told me once WE'LL be nested together as birds
but now every THING seems wrong and LIKE A lie
its painfull to BARE... i'm definitely getting mad ...
i see you every where
unconsciously trying to reach your hands ...
where everything between DISAPPEARS
no way no chance to see you again :(
i hope your life goes AS WELL as u want
while every thing i want is to die...
between your arms as i once dreamed
it's true now you keep killing me with your words ..
. where our passion gone
i'm asking with finger crossed is that what i deserve ?

Answer 2

i just helped you edit otherwise it was really good
sad but good

Answer 3

lol ur welcome :)