Question

PLEASE HELP ME REVISE MY PARAGRAPH...... IM GIVING MEDALS

Answer 1

Women still have to deal with being neglected by men because they are the weaker sex, treated like there the lesser of us when they should be treated like queens and princesses because without them we wouldn’t be here. Even in our supposed to be United States women are ridiculously disrespected. Recently, in Florida Michael Boyce was accused of fatally shooting his wife, Alexis Boyce - who was eight months pregnant - inside the Orlando apartment they shared with the woman’s parents. One of her unborn twin sons died, but the other was still alive and listed in critical condition at Winnie Palmer Hospital. Women are being abused and not many people try and do anything to prevent the possible things that could happen until it’s too late. Just how the women who was raped because she had to walk home from her night shift, because public transportation stop running at 7:00 pm. Now that the women was assaulted and the doctors told her she was HIV positive and that she might be pregnant the city