what do you think?
I watch as my destiny hang in the balance letting go of all ive ever known . I watch you take your final steps toward the man you want to be and I notice that this time the mans not holding my hand.

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what do  you think? 
I watch as my destiny hang in the balance letting go of all ive ever known . I watch you take your final steps toward the man you want to be and I notice that this time the mans not holding my hand.

anonymous · Answer

This is deep and really well written

anonymous · Answer

Ur talented and should do more

secret66 · Answer

yeah..you should do more as mentioned up^ I guess you can write a poem-or a song. ;)
Great-Job!

anonymous · Answer

thanks