Question

Hey im writing a song heres the lyrics i have so far, ill attach music to can you either tell me how the music is..or try to sing to it nd attach it here im needing a melody line

Answer 1

Verse 1:
Ive been to alot of different places but ive never seen one like you
Ive looked at lots of pretty faces but its yours that would stay true
Tell me what you want and ill get it, just for you
Tell me what you need and ill get it, just for you


Verse 2:
You made me laugh, you made me cry in the best of ways,
You made me want you more and more each and every day
But now I cant.. I cant even say that its just for you
No I cant even say that its ok – just for you

Chrous
You are mine and I am yours
So let’s get out and rule the world
I need you and you need me
So let’s pack up and leave now baby



Bridge
What did I do?
I just loved you.
But now our loves fading away,
That is not okay
I need you to stay with me
Every day

Answer 2

It sounds great you did a really good job im proud of you nick!

Answer 3

Cool

Answer 4

Oh forgot to say it flowed smoothly man

Answer 5

thanks

Answer 6

It's good.

Answer 7

thanks

Answer 8

its really good

Answer 9

thanks

Answer 10

your welcome

Answer 11

WOW!! its good!

Answer 12

thanks

Answer 13

your welcome!

Answer 14

@tHe_FiZiCx99 @okrzesik10

Answer 15

@thadyoung

Answer 16

cute hahaXD :)

Answer 17

lol im watching blue mountain state whats up?

Answer 18

OMG lue mountain state though....Quck somebody get me a jock strap and a cookie

Answer 19

quick*

Answer 20

haha

Answer 21

hehe

Answer 22

what season?

Answer 23

lol i just started it so S1 E1

Answer 24

omg haha ur about to get addicted lol

Answer 25

never seen or heard of that show

Answer 26

its on netflix

Answer 27

lol thats where im watching it

Answer 28

yea i dont watch that much tv or Netflix anymore

Answer 29

its amazing

Answer 30

lol

Answer 31

lol its funny because my name is thad

Answer 32

i know thats actually what i thought of hha when i met u

Answer 33

later in the season youll understandd why hes called thad

Answer 34

does anyone one want to talk in the music chat room

Answer 35

ehh no too much lag

Answer 36

ok than

Answer 37

srry

Answer 38

xD COOKIE!, COOKIE!

Answer 39

haha

Answer 40

why r u apologizing u know u don't have to but thanks its alright

Answer 41

i feel bad

Answer 42

wow its cool !

Answer 43

i like it

Answer 44

that's really good! Keep it up! :)

Answer 45

@forevershorty

Answer 46

wow

Answer 47

Its good and flows smoothly ^_^ But if your going to do this as a project or anything I would suggest fixing up the grammar :P A lot is two words and there are some punctuation mistakes .-. Hehe sorry to be a grammar nazi >:D

Answer 48

thnks