Sacha wants to use figurative language to introduce the setting. What is the most effective way for her to rewrite sentence 1?

Sentence 1 - Everyone looked toward the door as the robot instructor rolled into the classroom.

A) Everyone looked toward the door as the futuristic instructor bolted into the classroom.
D) The students gazed up like obedient pets as the robot instructor rolled into the classroom.

Question

Sacha wants to use figurative language to introduce the setting.  What is the most effective way for her to rewrite sentence 1?

Sentence 1 - Everyone looked toward the door as the robot instructor rolled into the classroom.

A) Everyone looked toward the door as the futuristic instructor bolted into the classroom.
D) The students gazed up like obedient pets as the robot instructor rolled into the classroom.

anonymous · Answer

I want to say it's A. 'A' sounds better.

anonymous · Answer

I would say D because it's got figurative language in there, and engages the reader immediately!

beccaboo333 · Answer

Agreed^