Question

Here's a poem I wrote... a lot of ppl told me they like it a lot, so I thought I'd share! :)

Answer 1

:P

Answer 2

The Puppet Master

How can one laugh
How can one smile
Your life is dangling
By a white thread

Who's the Puppet master
Who's the director
The red curtains are pulled
And you have places to go

The show is just a show
A life is just a life
Your hand moves right
Your foot moves left

Do you even know
Where you are going
What you are doing

How your life
is dangling by a white thread
You want to speak
You want to scream

But who is there to hear you
behind that painted smile?
The crowd laughs
at whatever you do

The puppet master smiles
an evil smile
as he dangles you above

The show has ended
your placed in the glass box
for no one to touch
except the puppet master

How can one laugh
How can one smile
When your life is dangling
by a white thread?

Answer 3

Very good, and the way it is written, it promotes thoughts of a deeper meaning. I rate a 19 out of 10!

Answer 4

LOL.... thank you!! I like it too, and one of the main reasons is because it lets my readers think. And wonder what it all means :)

Answer 5

Yep! I'm Not terrible good at Poetry... Roses are Red, Violets are Blue.... Thats my kind of poem lol

Answer 6

lol >.< i'm that great either, I prefer writing novels but this one just came to me :P

Answer 7

Look up and see,
The stars are bright.
But what is beyond your shining lights?

Is there life?
Is there a meaning?
Is there perhaps some other leaning?

Deep in your eyes,
Deep in your soul,
something Dark stirs,
Something perturbing.


Some random Bad poetry on my part lol.

Answer 8

wow...!!..sweety,.. you rock....:D...
i read it twice and it gave me a different meaning each time..:D

Answer 9

No Booky I like it! You got something going there! haha, and thank you Gudden!!! :)

Answer 10

Your was way better, Mine was just made up on the fly...

Answer 11

you r welcome linda

Answer 12

Lets all just write Poems randomly lol.

Answer 13

lol

Answer 14

lol ur writing poem aren't you gudden! haha can't wait to read it :P

Answer 15

I'm just waiting, Gudden is probably going to blow my mind with her poem.

Answer 16

yeah it probably better than mine lol >.<

Answer 17

IDK, we'll have to see, yours will be incredibly hard to top.

Answer 18

haha... well... I don't know about that. Mine wasn't THAT great ....lol xD

Answer 19

:P It was Great.

Answer 20

Gudden Is making a long one, or a very well thought out one...

Answer 21

it's good

Answer 22

thank you Roach! :)

Answer 23

okay.. then here i go...

i am walking on a road all alone
feeling like am banging my head on a stone

sometimes i feel out like to cry
and sometimes i want to die...

i donot want to walk on this road of pains
cos, without him , it doesnot matter about my gains..

i miss him whensoever i close my eyes
the one that then flows are drops of love not cries..

i want to keep these tears as a braclet for me
which would keep me going as if, we were still the old "we"

i want to keep sending letters... even if you won't reply
cos of my mistake , are you still angry and still want me to cry

if you not.. then no one else,
i could wait for you, even all life long...
cos, i know for you my love.. my bond was very strong


omg..! i made something.. right now... :D... just take a look...

Answer 24

It's very good, and emotionally stirring.

Answer 25

wow this is awesome gudden!!! :) reminds of another poem i wrote lol.....

Answer 26

wow..! bt they are my own ideas... @linda3 ..
n thnx bookworm.. im actually not good in these things.. just gave it a try cos, my sis just advice me to do so...

Answer 27

Keep it up- your really good! :)

Answer 28

@bookworm and @linda3 .. i wasn't busy writing the poem.. bt was busy in PM...:p

Answer 29

@linda3 ... anyways.. thanks... dear,...:D.. for ur motivation...:D

Answer 30

your welcome!!! anytime! :D

Answer 31

ahahh ..:D

Answer 32

id hate to say it but it leaves me kinda depressed. but its cool tho

Answer 33

okay then.... sorry?

Answer 34

omg..! linda u there :p

Answer 35

nah its good i just thought it was sad

Answer 36

We are all here :P

Answer 37

bookworm u too here...:p

Answer 38

well it is what you perceive it to be. So everyone feels something different :)

Answer 39

can someone just help me out in making two XML files ASAP...
cos, i have to show those to my computer teacher within a period of 3 hours....:p

Answer 40

XML files?

Answer 41

Ah

Answer 42

Computer Science try there.

Answer 43

alright...:D

Answer 44

hope they can help!

Answer 45

that was beautiful :')

Answer 46

i could fine no one online then... :(

Answer 47

That's amazing

Answer 48

thank you!! :)

Answer 49

@jposey420

Answer 50

This is my favorite of your work...

Answer 51

@wittegirl1

Answer 52

Heck yeah ! A tag party :P

Answer 53

you r so talented :D

Answer 54

lol @dumbsearch2

Answer 55

:P