Question

I need some opinions on these I am thinking of publishing my work.

Answer 1

Even if you don't...

Even though you aren’t beautiful doesn’t mean you don’t feel beautiful. Even though you aren’t smart doesn’t mean you can’t feel smart. If you say something ridiculous it’s better than being absolutely boring. Just express yourself. Express your inner self. Love who you are. This will brighten up your future.

Answer 2

Anything

Anything you see… Anything you touch…Anything you smell… Anything you feel inside you…It shall be the window to your soul… It is the window to your heart…The openness…The bewilderness…The trust, hopefulness… Trust me. I can show the way. Follow your heart and you will know the way.

Answer 3

Together Forever

When our eyes meet I can't speak. We can only smile at each other. I think I can't believe we are together...I love him. All you can do is say I love you. You call me not text. We email all day long. I tell you I'm sick. You say I wanna be by your side to make sure you get better. You care for me. You love me. You hug me. I love you. I worrie about you. I care for you. We love each other. We care about each other. We search for each other. We find each other. No one can stop us from see'n each other. No can tell us we arn't in love. Only we know us. Only we do. So let us be free to see each other. We are in love. HAVEN'T YOU EVER BEEN IN LOVE BEFORE ( true love) ????

Answer 4

Music

The beat
It won’t stop
It keeps me going
I can’t let go
Let me be
It is how I am
Let it go
Drop the beat
Stop
That’s it
Keep it goin’

Answer 5

One Love

It started as a normal day at work Ended in the best day of her life He texted her out of no where She didn’t even know who he was When they talked it seamed As if no one else Existed on earth As if they were the only ones left Now he is her Romeo And she is his Juliet Forever and Always Till death do they part

Answer 6

Hear Me Now

No one will hear me out.
Listen closely...
No you can't hear me yet....
Listen to how I feel inside.
Wait…
Please listen….
I care about you, but do you care about me???
Listen…..
For once.
Maybe….
You will see the truth.
Or maybe not.
You don’t get it do you???
Do you??? Do you really???
I want you to listen to me!
Please….
Help me...
You don’t know how lost I am.
I need you now.
Please……
Listen I have a story to tell.
I Don’t understand you anymore.
You treat me like a child.
You push me away.
When I need you.
Why???
Why me???
Why now?

Answer 7

@justnick09
@JessicaBBY
@Hollywood_Undead
@rose21

Answer 8

i like it

Answer 9

Life can’t change

Don’t you wish you could just change? Disappear and start over… I know everyone finds one moment in their life that they want to change. Life is Life… You are still you… You can’t change that… No matter how much you want to… You can’t hide the real you in a uniform… Dying your hair won’t change who you are… Changing your name won’t who you are… We all want to start over… Be someone new… We can’t… We are who we are… No matter what that won’t change… We will never hide the past… Try… Yes… But does it really go away? No matter what we can’t change…

Answer 10

Thanks @justnick09

Answer 11

My Beloved

You always tell me my beauty takes your breath away. You say my personality blows your heart away, but all I can say is “I LOVE YOU”! You can always make my day better when you tell me that. I shall never LOVE anyone else. If I shall, I shall die a painful death. I tell you, you may LOVE again and I may not. When you ask why, I shall say you need to find that answer out on your own.

Answer 12

Thank you fro the medal @justnick09

Answer 13

@CrazyCountryGirl

Answer 14

I like it, what's the genre of music?

Answer 15

its not music

Answer 16

its poetry. I'm a poet

Answer 17

and I have 3 comp books full of my poetry i think its time to start publishing

Answer 18

thanks for the medal @CrazyCountryGirl

Answer 19

Ohhhhh......Sorry. You should put it to music, it would make a great song. I don't know much about poetry, I'm an artist and I like music.

Answer 20

Id have to work with someone els for it to turn to music. I'm not that good at making up songs and stuff pluse its hard cuz im going deaf

Answer 21

Oh...Sorry. I like it though.

Answer 22

its okay :) thanks

Answer 23

@okrzesik10
@Xmoses1
@beccaboo333
@arabpride

Answer 24

thank you

Answer 25

@FlvsGirl
@thomaster

Answer 26

@crazy_gurl99

Answer 27

hi ^.^

Answer 28

lol hi lexi

Answer 29

why did you invite me to music ?(:

Answer 30

read the rest of the comments

Answer 31

you have a way with words <3

Answer 32

lol thanks ^_^

Answer 33

anytime (: ugh i have to go home pretty soon

Answer 34

awe okay

Answer 35

817-863-7345 should txt meh (: OR KIK lexiee_sexyy

Answer 36

Hay if anyone has a good idea for a title for a book of love poems let me know i have been trying to come up with a name for a long time any suggestions?

Answer 37

@crazy_gurl99 I dont have a fone

Answer 38

:o

Answer 39

ya

Answer 40

facebok?

Answer 41

ya hold on

Answer 42

Hay if anyone has a good idea for a title for a book of love poems let me know i have been trying to come up with a name for a long time any suggestions?

Answer 43

ok @kenziejo1998

Answer 44

ummm.....is it all about love or life in general?

Answer 45

kinda both its in the middle

Answer 46

@blues

Answer 47

Warrior of Life and Love?

Answer 48

I like that one thank you so much for all the advice

Answer 49

Welcome, maybe I can show you some of my art sometime.

Answer 50

That be sweet I love art but only if I was ok at it i cant even draw a stick person

Answer 51

My sister thinks my art is morbid, it's not though. mostly.... I just have to take picture's of it. The I'll tag u on here to see what people think of it. Though I am mostly into drawing fashion. I like that you can draw what u like to wear.

Answer 52

my pic

Answer 53

My friend said that all my poetry in my 2nd comp book is all deep dark and depressing but its not it just is extreamly detailed

Answer 54

@justnick09 thats really good

Answer 55

thanks

Answer 56

Yep, though I am mostly just now getting into art not fashion designing. I liked art before but only recently have I really had the urge to learn to draw better.

Answer 57

Welcome @justnick09

Answer 58

@CrazyCountryGirl i tryed ppl try to teach me and it goes in one ear and out the other ya know wat im saying i dont try

Answer 59

to draw any more cuz it look worse than my brothers and he in 2nd grade

Answer 60

Oh, my twin sister can't draw a stick figure either. It's funny how different we r. We even like different music.

Answer 61

ya that is funny

Answer 62

@Darry&Gator

Answer 63

@bibby
@DullJackel09
@Destinymasha
@Data_LG2

Answer 64

whats up?

Answer 65

Go for it

Answer 66

-wow, these are gorgeous :}

Answer 67

Thanks I'm just nervous to publish it. You guys got any book title ideas. thanks guys

Answer 68

@mangorox
@Marco,Phillip
@Mech123

Answer 69

thank yall for the medals

Answer 70

Hey..If you get it published Pm me!! :D Don't forget to mentionyour awesome friend Katie on OS. :D lol

Answer 71

I will let you all know when I do :) thanks for all the support

Answer 72

it sounds really good hope for the best for you...

Answer 73

Great work....I think you should publish it!! I would totally buy it :D Message me if you do!

Answer 74

thanks

Answer 75

I like it sounds amazing. follow your dream and you'll be surprised how far you go :P

Answer 76

Amen @Blondie_Love

Answer 77

they are all great :))
In my opinion, i think you should be more deep because for me it's pretty straight forward, but anyways maybe it's just me XD
well, the ideas are GREAT!!!!!!
i totally like it ♥

Answer 78

There's a writing section on here for poetry and such. Try there! :D This is all good too.

Answer 79

Thanks @beccaboo333

Answer 80

Thank you everyone I might get together with a friend to makes some into songs thank you everyone for your support :)

Answer 81

I love y'all

Answer 82

Awww!! Love u too!!!!

Answer 83

:') I am so happy yall likes my work

Answer 84

@beccaboo333 send me a link to that poetry thing u was talkin bout and ill look at it

Answer 85

@kenziejo1998 i really like all of these keep going!!

Answer 86

thanks @Hollywood_Undead ^_^

Answer 87

Youre very welcome!

Answer 88

i just wrote a song last night i am going to post it soon to get opinions cuz it the 1st one ive ever writen

Answer 89

aight post it id love to read it!!

Answer 90

its called Jack Frost