Question

Can someone try to make this into a good sentence? My brain got shut off a while ago.


The word money is repeated throughout the whole poem, because it is the theme, idea or clause that is presented with an opposing idea, that money creates greed and or have people see money has a good thing when in actuality it a lie.

Answer 1

The word "money" is repeated throughout the whole poem, because it is the theme, idea, or clause that is presented with an opposing idea; that money creates greed and/or have people see money as a good thing, when in reality, it is a lie.

Does that sound right?

Answer 2

The word "money" is repeated throughout the whole poem. Because money is the theme, idea, or clause that is presented with an opposing idea, people see money as a good thing, when in actuality it is a lie; money creates greed.
I tried not to alter it too much, but I shifted things around a little bit to help it flow. I hope it still gets your point across. x

Answer 3

Im trying not to start a sentence with the word "Because". Lol my teacher hates it.

Answer 4

But hey, thanks alot :) It really did help, other than the because :)

Answer 5

Really? It still makes a complete sentence if used in a complex sentence… Give me just minute and I'll try to rewrite that sentence:)

Answer 6

No no, it's fine :) Thanks though, I got it from here xD I could just combine the first 2 sentences.

Answer 7

Yeah, that will work:) Thanks!

Answer 8

The word "money" is repeated throughout the whole poem. It is repeated because the theme, idea, or clause that is presented with an opposing idea. Which is, that money creates greed and/or have people see money as a good thing, when in reality, it is a lie.