Question

I have an emotional story I'm writing, but I do need another story to contrast to the first one. Any suggestions?

Answer 1

Depends on emotional, if you mean emotionally happy (tears of joy lel) then you could contrast it with something totally opposite with a saddening effect. For example:

First story: A little girl reunites with her mother and is crying tears of joy.

Next Event: She loses her mother, and has to be fostered. Now she's crying tears of omg. ;-;

Basically something that ruins the moment, If the story you are writing is emotional pain, it would be vice-versa.

Answer 2

I have the first story, but it's a "bittersweet" sadness story.

Answer 3

What the main story about?

Answer 4

It's a daughter's confession letter to her father who was sent to fight the Cold War.
In the end, she reveals that she is standing at his grave.

Answer 5

Then perhaps you could add a follow-up event with the daughter meeting someone that will take care of her . . . someone new. The main idea could be she is being taken in and considers him/her to be a father/mother to the daughter . . . I'm a bit rusty but I just thought of that after re-watching Les Miserables last night.

Answer 6

OMG LES MISERABLES

Answer 7

Kind of like when Cosette's mother dies and is taken in by Jean Valjean.

Answer 8

Or whatever his name was at that moment. :P

Answer 9

Let me hug you ;u; -hugs-

Answer 10

I love hugs! :D

-hugs back-

Answer 11

Yay! :D