Question

Can someone just read over this essay and tell me any errors and what you think about it?

Answer 1

Which superhero or villain would you want to changes places with for a day and why?

Answer 2

If I were to exchange places with a Hero/Villian, I'd be Batman. Batman is probably the most realitic Super Hero out there; well made by DC Comics. Batman is just an ordinary human, living an infamous life whose acts speak louder then others. Batman aka Bruce Wayne, did'nt live a life of luxury. Despite the money he has inherited, he had to achieve his goals through hard work and detemination. He strived to achieve a figure of human perfection. He may have his high technology but he trained extensively mastering detective skills, martial arts, and criminal psychology unlike so many others who may have had powers already. Despite Batmans inhumane ways of combat and sense of multiple personas, he can be viewed as a true role model and a paragon of excellence.

Living in his shoes for just one day would a be a unattainable privledge and opportunity. I'd stand tall with pride, no powers but strength, logic, and perseverance.

Answer 3

fixed some spelling mistakes and punctuation, moved some things around also. you're good to go.

If I were to exchange places with a Hero/Villain, I'd be Batman. Batman (also known as Bruce Wayne), is probably the most realistic Superhero out there; and is well made by DC Comics. Batman is just an ordinary human, living an infamous life whose acts speak louder than others. Batman didn't live a life of luxury, despite the money he has inherited. He had to achieve his goals through hard work and determination, and strived to achieve a figure of human perfection. He may have had his high technology, but he trained extensively: mastering detective skills, martial arts, and criminal psychology; unlike so many others who may have had powers already. Despite Batman’s inhumane ways of combat and sense of multiple personas, he can be viewed as a true role model and a paragon of excellence.

Living in his shoes for just one day would be an unattainable privilege and opportunity. I'd stand tall with pride, no powers but strength, logic, and perseverance.

Answer 4

Ty!