Question

Okay y'all I finished editing my 1st song still no melody yet I'm workin' on it with a close friend.

Answer 1

Jack Frost

By: Snow Elizibeth

Even though I can't see you now
Doesn't mean I can't feel your pain
In my heart
When you step in the room
I can feel you’re near
Take a breath and I'll see
Where you stand
Even though you don't know I can see you
Even though you don't know I believe
I feel your presents here
So please oh please
Look at me in the eyes
See what I see
You’re the only person like me
That can freeze
With only a touch
Only a movement
Just take a step with me
See what I can see
And be with me
(But yet you can't)
I am what I am
You can't
See what all I can be
It's because
I'm invisible to you
Even though you can't see me now
Doesn't mean you can't feel my touch
Look at us
Separated
By fate
They believe in you
No one knows I exist
But that’s where fate brought me
So only I can see
Where you and me
Will stay
And never
See one another---again
Only I remember
Every memory
Of you and me
Best friends---separated
Now I’m all alone
With no one to talk to
But the Snowflakes
In the air
Nobody cares
So I lay here
For the last snow
Of time
---Goodbye---

Answer 2

@Hollywood_Undead
@justnick09
@FlvsGirl
@crazy_gurl99
@coltonFowler
@CrazyCountryGirl
@CrazySouthernGurl14

Answer 3

in the line that says "You’re the only person like me " it's supposed to say "You’re the only one like me "

Answer 4

Thanks Hollywood :)

Answer 5

@DullJackel09

Answer 6

@okrzesik10
@beccaboo333
@sudonick

Answer 7

its good:)

Answer 8

Seems good to me ;3 what kind of beat to it though?

Answer 9

idk yet im still workin on it when i got it i'll post a link to the beat i promise y'all

Answer 10

any suggestions for what instruments I should use

Answer 11

@Xmoses1
@Yuba

Answer 12

amazing

Answer 13

thanks ^_^ its the 1st song ive ever written

Answer 14

~ i just love creative people :}

Answer 15

^_^ hehe well thanks I cna write but thats the only way im creative

Answer 16

*can

Answer 17

wow this song is great!

Answer 18

thanks :)

Answer 19

thats pretty good

Answer 20

thanks

Answer 21

@travisbrown372
@secret66

Answer 22

great

Answer 23

really? thanks

Answer 24

welcome :)

Answer 25

^_^

Answer 26

looks great :D

Answer 27

thanks ^_^ my friend and i where up till like 4am working on the melody it will be a while we are working with the new sound board app

Answer 28

5 thumbs up

Answer 29

thanks ^_^

Answer 30

Amazing lyrics! Maybe try a piano? Might work pretty well for the lyrics. Or you could always go something pop-like with the synth.

Answer 31

okay thanks :D so far we been using a sound board and its really hard

Answer 32

Yeah. They really are.

Answer 33

I suggest something like mixcraft, or FL studio. ♥

Answer 34

thanks

Answer 35

@HarleyQuinnlovesjoker

Answer 36

Excellent poem!
You sure got a lot of medals, lol :D

Answer 37

thanks :D and lol ya ik

Answer 38

I LOVE IT!!!!

Answer 39

Thanks :)