Question

So I am writing a book, but i need help editing it.. I only have the prologue so if u could help ill be in ur debt!! Please help

Answer 1

Okay, so I made some changes. But a few tips when writing... try not to use what I call "baby words" to describe things. Such as, "so much", there are many words that can replace that. Also, any number that comes before 10 should be spelled out... for example 2 weeks ago she went to to doctor. This should actually be written as: Two weeks ago she went to the doctor.

Answer 2

You are definitely headed in the right direction and I find your story interesting and relate-able. If you just keep these things in mind I think that you will do very well.

Answer 3

Okay thank you!

Answer 4

No problem... Once you have more written you can send it to me and I would love to help you with that as well... I also wanted to mention that the monologue portion of it was very well written... I did not make many changes there.

Answer 5

Okay thank you for helping!! :) @wishuponastar13

Answer 6

Of course (: