Question

I need help i am working on sentence structure, spelling, proofreading, plural nouns, possessive nouns, pronouns and comma splice, run-on, or fragment.
Can someone help me in this one please.
Ms. Morales, we currently manage over 75 rental propertys in the greater Phoenix area. We are available to whomever needs rental assistance. Either for private residences or for multiple unit. One client wrote to us saying, “You’ve managed my units much better than me, and you’re firm has made life much easier for my husband and I.” Not one of our clients has ever canceled their contract with us. To all

Answer 1

@linda3 @rose21 can help :P

Answer 2

Well, better than I could anyways :P

Answer 3

I am a little confused is this all of it or only some of it?

Answer 4

this is part of it.
thanks

Answer 5

Here is the entire business letter
My partner and myself are certin that our rental management service can help you care for your fathers-in-law apartment complex in Scottsdale, here are answers to your questions.
To manage a clients rental units, our team keeps their charges as low as possible. Every house, rental, and condo operates under the same low fee schedule for their services. We charge 10 percent of all fees collected.
In addition, we will advertise whenever a unit becomes vacant. We charge an additional 10 percent on the first years rent whenever we fill a vacant unit. Whether we charge the last months rent in advance is between you and I. This agreement is made with the person whom signs the contract. Our firms two attornies are available to assist you and I. If necesary.
During the early 2000’s we expanded, and our’s is now the only local firm to offer maintenance and cleaning services to their customers.
Ms. Morales, we currently manage over 75 rental propertys in the greater Phoenix area. We are available to whomever needs rental assistance. Either for private residences or for multiple unit. One client wrote to us saying, “You’ve managed my units much better than me, and you’re firm has made life much easier for my husband and I.” Not one of our clients has ever canceled their contract with us. To allow us to ease the burden of your responsibilitys, please call my partner or I at 358-2249.

Answer 6

Okay so the task is to correct the grammatical errors in this letter correct?

Answer 7

correct