can some one help me with my english writing assignment? inbox me if you can help, or at least try to help.

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anonymous · Answer

What is it about? or have to be on?

anonymous · Answer

it has a passage i have to read and then it has this question:        The following summary of the passage contains three errors.  Identify two of the errors and explain how you would correct each one.
Much of the world’s oceans remain unexplored, and scientists at the WHOI are building a new underwater vehicle that will allow them to study the Challenger Deep, which is the deepest point of the ocean.  Alvin, the current underwater vehicle, has helped scientists make amazing underwater discoveries. But despite its many years of service, Alvin needs to be replaced because it can no long keep up with the changing underwater ecosystems.  The new underwater vehicle will allow for larger teams of scientists to descent to the ocean floor in one dive.

anonymous · Answer

So we are looking for grammar errors?

anonymous · Answer

idk, i just wanna get it turned in so i can go to sleep, lol

anonymous · Answer

Well, the obvious ones I saw were 

take out “and” next to “scientists” It is unneeded and make the sentence flow smoother. 

A comma after “vehicle”
                             ^^^^  HOI are building a new underwater vehicle, that will allow them to study the Challenger Deep, 


hope this helps and you can get some sleep!

anonymous · Answer

okay, i dont think thts what my teacher meant, but whatever.