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OpenStudy (anonymous):

hey everybody i have to write a story with a scary twist ending could you please help me come up with ideas

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Okay, I'll try to help. What is the ending?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i have to write the whole thing

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Okay, so what do you want the story to be about.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i was trying to make it about >>> hold on i will just post what i have so far lol

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Okay :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

On a hot summer day the high school’s top girl Heidi and her two friends were preparing for the best party of the year. Heidi's birthday party! The three girls Heidi, Ashley, and Lilly were all getting there hair and makeup and nails done. When they were getting their nails done something weird was going on in the back

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Okay, The story is nice so far :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i could not go any further i had a brain block or something

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Okay, So The Plot of the story is? the preparing for her birthday. But when they went into the Nail salon to get there nails done, something weird was going on? Hmmm... Okay well maybe the Manager went missing, Or the Boss was firing somebody, Or Maybe um.. hold on let me think.

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Maybe, one of the Employees found a dead body in the back?

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Those are my ideas, but the best one i have is that the manager went missing.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

omg i like that but we have to save the scary twist for the end lol

OpenStudy (cakt07):

XD ohhh... Okay well, The manager was firing one of the employees, and then in the end of the story the EX employee kidnapped the boss and killed him?

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Like for revenge or something.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

lol i like that i really do

OpenStudy (cakt07):

But in the Middle you can put like hes firing somebody for messing up somebody nails.

OpenStudy (cakt07):

So when the employee is fired, he gets angry and plans for revenge.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

right lol i was going to make it where the the fired one was another friend of heidis and the boss was hidden in heidi's house and the cops came and suspected heidi and took her to jail but they later found out that it was not her

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Okay, I like that, But what did the Boss do? What did the cops come to her house for?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

someone at the party found the boss in the closet so they called the cops but i am not sure wether i want the boss to be alive yet or not

OpenStudy (cakt07):

OR, you could make it like, When something was going on in the back, He fired the employee, for some odd reason, and he hired Heidi with out asking. But the boss was up to something.

OpenStudy (cakt07):

OHHH! Okay!

OpenStudy (cakt07):

THAtS GOOD! THAT IS A GREAT IDEA!

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Yes, The employee was a friend, but ended up a back stabber at the end thats GREAT!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thank you

OpenStudy (cakt07):

So I guess you have your story then :).

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thank you so much you helped me so much i really appreciate it

OpenStudy (cakt07):

You have your Plot twist at the end of the story :)

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Your welcome :)! Glad to help!

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Oh ya BTW can i get medal?

OpenStudy (cakt07):

Thanks :)!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

definitely

OpenStudy (cakt07):

OMG THANK YOU!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

welcomez:P

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