Question

would you read a book if the prologue started like this? :
I live in a world that barely survived WWIII. We only eat the food that was prepackaged when my grandparents were children. There are rumors that the government is almost out of it. The USA has recovered enough that those people with enough money to can send their children to a school that teaches the art of espionage.
I am one of those children.

what do you think my best friend wants to be a writer and this was my 1st attempt at writing idk if it is any good. if you do like it check this link:
http://www.wattpad.com/35672869

Answer 1

@madeline.grey hi this is my book please check the link....

Answer 2

"The USA has recovered enough that those people with enough money, can send their children to a school that teaches the art of espionage."

(I took out the word to where it said "those with enough money to"... you do not need it there, it messes with the flow of things)

Answer 3

But, I do think that this is very captivating.... it captured my attention and I would definitely read this.

Answer 4

thank you check the link and comment on how you liked it...

Answer 5

Oh okay will do (:

Answer 6

did you or have any problems with it?

Answer 7

@Keygrover hey this is a book i am writing.

Answer 8

It sounds good

Answer 9

:} )

Answer 10

@Destinymasha

Answer 11

Oh yea, i did read this!
Very nice:}

Answer 12

did u read tha link? it is tha rest of the story.

Answer 13

~yes i did

Answer 14

okay what did u think of the end?

Answer 15

PERFECT GRABBER!!

Answer 16

yay thank u any idea on where to go next.

Answer 17

start with some ugly adjectives [ pain...injustice, poverty] something like that

Answer 18

oh thank you! I need someones help with how to start the next chapter tho.

Answer 19

err...probably not me - im bad at giving advice lol

Answer 20

tis okay...me 2.

Answer 21

Sounds like a great book! I read a bit of it, It's amazing (:

Answer 22

Thank you all the much!!!!!!!!