Question

please help with grammar corrections

Answer 1

Jack Friedman 5.09 2/3/14
If you ask anyone what a book is they will tell you a book is important in everyday life some books can be educational, funny, sad, and many others. Some people feel offended and disturbed about some writings and if a book has dangerous or bad content it should be removed. I agree that some books depict disturbing content but that does not mean you should ban it. Banning books should not be allowed, just because a book has content that is not suitable for some ages or is discriminating against people does not mean nobody should be allowed to read it.
Books are everywhere and at any point in your life you have read or will read a book. Many people find some books to be offending and disturbing. Many books depict bad and disturbing content that is not good for a lot of people but that does not mean people should get rid of it. Other people believe books that depict disturbing or bad content should be banned. If a book depicts disturbing or bad content they should just put an age restriction on it not ban it. This allows books to be used by many people that are not affected by the content.
Banning books should not be allowed no matter what content it holds. Banning a book takes away education and how other people feel about things banning a book will take away a writes opinion on ideas and things and keeping it from reaching the public. Books are good for people and can take a lot of stress off of them. A lot of people who are upset or stressed out find that reading a book helps them. Some books that are filled with adventure and educational ideas such as facts are banned just because of a few words or depictions that some people don’t like. If people ban books it takes away the opportunity for many others to read it.
Many people feel that books are bad for most audiences but, I feel that just because a book is not suitable for someone that it should be banned. Instead of banning a book people can just put an age restrict on books that have inappropriate and disturbing content. This allows people that are not affected by the writing to read it but also keeping audiences that will be affected by it negatively away.

Answer 2

(remeber to indent)If you ask anyone what a book is they will tell you a book is important in everyday life(period) (^)Some books can be educational, funny, sad, and many others. Some people feel offended and disturbed about some writings and if a book has dangerous or bad content(,) it should be removed. I agree that some books depict disturbing content(,) but that does not mean you should ban it. Banning books should not be allowed, just because a book has content that is not suitable for some ages or is discriminating against people does not mean nobody should be allowed to read it.
Books are everywhere and at any point in your life you have read or will read a book. Many people find some books to be offending and disturbing. Many books depict bad and disturbing content that is not good for a lot of people but that does not mean people should get rid of it. Other people believe books that depict disturbing or bad content should be banned. If a book depicts disturbing or bad content they should just put an age restriction on it(,) not ban it. This allows books to be used by many people that are not affected by the content.
Banning books should not be allowed no matter what content it holds. Banning a book takes away education and how other people feel about things(period) (^)Banning a book will take away (remove the a) writes (remove writes, change to rights and add a comma,) opinion(s) on ideas (remove and things) (comma)and keep(keeps not keeping) it from reaching the public. Books are good for people and can take a lot of stress off of them. A lot of people who are upset or stressed out find that reading a book helps them. Some books that are filled with adventure and educational ideas(comma) such as facts(comma) are banned just because of a few words or depictions that some people don’t like. If people ban books it takes away the opportunity for many others to read it.
Many people feel that books are bad for most audiences but, I feel that just because a book is not suitable for someone that it should be banned. Instead of banning a book people can just put an age restrict on books that have inappropriate and disturbing content. This allows people that are not affected by the writing to read it but also keeping audiences that will be affected by it negatively away.