So this more of a help question not having to do with studying..

But the question is " what is your reason for transfer request?" and my response would be something along the lines of "Moving would better my education, help learn more and increasing my chances of a better college."

But I'd like to make it sound better and make the school want me to go instead of just telling them I want to go..
Any help?

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So this more of a help question not having to do with studying..

But the question is " what is your reason for transfer request?" and my response would be something along the lines of "Moving would better my education, help learn more and increasing my chances of a better college."

But I'd like to make it sound better and make the school want me to go instead of just telling them I want to go..
Any help?

anonymous · Answer

To be able to answer your question, you need to answer mine, if that's okay. 
§ Why do you want to move? Is it because of a boyfriend, bad teacher or what, you'll help me motivate why your transfer could be benefiting.

anonymous · Answer

I want to move because the teachers are not that good at teaching also the other school is closer and would help me get more credits for high school and even college