Question

Anyone willing to proofread an essay for grammatical errors?

Answer 1

@beccaboo333

Answer 2

@poopsiedoodle @ashleyisakitty

Answer 3

I'd help, but it's 11:26 at night and I have to bed. But, @Compassionate

Answer 4

i could tomorrow

Answer 5

post

Answer 6

>She leaves Joe and runs off with Joe Starkk.

What?

>Women in modern America have more rights and better treatment than anyone else in the world, however, we are not equal to man.

You mean, "we are not equal to MEN"

> They are viewed as baby machines that cook, clean and rear children solely.

I hope no child rearing will be going on! hehe. You mean, "bare."

> United Nations which states every man has the same rates
"Rights."

>Women having rights are an important factor that needs to be fought for.

"IS an important factor."


>This issue is a clear human rights one,

I'm sorry, what?

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I'm not even going to address your statistics, but, where are you getting them from? They seem, uh, fascinating.

Answer 7

wow u caught alot of stuff that i would never have good for you than.

Answer 8

"This is an issue is not only displayed in my novel" should be: This is an issue not only displayed in my novel.

"and many other countries across entire world" should be: and many other countries across the entire world" There is a few more but i have to go i'll try to come back later. :) what grade are you in??

Answer 9

@Compassionate I got them from my course. @trentdot I'm in 12th.