I have to write an essay due Tuesday, and present it in class... any ideas for prompts? I'm not doing personal stories. The only idea I have is about how fast food is ruining our country... everyone's getting fat/obese and all that...
not only that >> there's high blood pressure, heart disease, and etc To put it plainly.......DEATH
diabetes and depression -- all that equals one sad America
well, yes, but those aren't addressed as much... I have to write something that the audience can relate to.
-you're better off with the personal story.......write about a scary experience
use imagery, hyperbole , metaphors - make it interesting....
I don't have a scary experience...
~who said it had to be real?
Just write it like you own it :}
..... I can't make a personal story like that....
sure you can - if i can do it , you can too
I can't lie about things like that.... the teacher is a perfectionist and the students will see through it...
The grade is entirely based on student criticism.
i see........sorry
No, it's okay. You tried to help. (:
I'll try to use your ideas if I can... ^-^;
:}
Hmm... diabetes sounds pretty relateable... Does "diabetes from too much fast food and too little exercise" count?
i shank so
Well, I guess I'll add that to my queue - I have to write more than one essay in case I suddenly change my mind about what to use...
any more ideas guys...? I was thinking more global/societal crisis things (already wrote one on technology so that wouldn't work out, unfortunately ^^')
@rajat97 @Luigi0210 @raffle_snaffle @charlotte123 o_o?
first of all you can write about the history like what people would eat in the past then, how the mind's of the people stuck to the craze of fast food icannot help you now i gotta go i'm soorry:)
okay but thank you for helping @rajat97
you're welcome
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