Question

How's my song?!

Answer 1

You make me feel all bubbly and tickly inside
When you talk my stomach gets butterflies
It’s your deep blue eyes
It’s your crooked smile
It’s the days I talk to you that makes my life worth while
It’s your love, that’s the beat
It’s my words, slurred to speech
It’s your giggle with the wind, a look and then you grin
It’s this feeling I’ll endeavor until the end.
I love you
Please love me too
We’ll be as happy as can be forever and infinity
Wrap your arms on my waist
Pull me close to your face
Puckered lips and a bubble-gum kiss
Bitten lips for a moment like this
I will cherish you
Will you care for me too
When you’re sick, you’ll need someone’s care
Look to your left and I’ll be there
Baby, I can’t wait
Till I can hold you in my arms
And all of me
Will love all of you
I’m in love with all of your charm
All of your flaws
Just so long as I got you
So I come out true…
Baby I love you! ;)

Answer 2

Like I said in chat, to make it flow a little easier, perhaps consider-
It's the days we talk that make my life worth while
for the 5th line.

Answer 3

Yea!! cool thank you for the feed back and your honesty

Answer 4

@.@ It does not need my help.

Answer 5

If this is your first song it was beautiful it flowed perfectly you got a knack for singing

Answer 6

Thank you!! But no it's not my first song... I've written others!

Answer 7

Well then keep writing :)

Answer 8

Teehee I plan too!

Answer 9

._. Notifications. Smh.

Answer 10

It's not bad, it's rather good I think

Answer 11

its awesome!!!!!!!

Answer 12

thanks much!!!

Answer 13

your welcome

Answer 14

Can I please get a medal??!11

Answer 15

I don't have any

Answer 16

Thanks whoever did it

Answer 17

Haha you're welcome

Answer 18

cooooll !! its really nice :)

Answer 19

Seems good.

Answer 20

ya! its gr8..

Answer 21

That song is from the heart :)
@AuroraB