Please recheck my work,I had to write good examples under bad examples of the following definitions.

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hba · Answer

@EmeraldSunset

hba · Answer

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hba · Answer

I did not do 3 and 7.your feedback on how to do it would be appriciated.

hba · Answer

@adrynicoleb

adrynicoleb · Answer

Dang 4 pages...This may take me a little while. ._.

hba · Answer

Um you just have to check that according to a particular type i have written the right bad example. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ^_^

hba · Answer

You should help me and take the medals.

adrynicoleb · Answer

What do you mean by "to a particular type"? Maybe I didn't learn this yet. ._.

hba · Answer

But you just read the definition and check whether i have written the right good example under the bad example or not.My objective was just to write the good example.

adrynicoleb · Answer

Sorry...Its 3am and I was having a brain fart. >.<  So far, its good.  But, at the concrete section, the only thing that you put was "Consider this advertising copy:".

hba · Answer

Yeah i don't know the 3rd and the 7th one :(

hba · Answer

So i didn't write it :p Help me.

adrynicoleb · Answer

Lol. It says, "The Lunchbox Wizard will save you time every day."  So how can you make this have a solid, focused, message that can help to create a clear picture? Any ideas?

hba · Answer

No idea :( Please help me lol :p

hba · Answer

It's funny tho :p

anonymous · Answer

@hba is right

anonymous · Answer

@Vallarylynn16

anonymous · Answer

I checked this already cx

hba · Answer

Haha lol i know :p I did the others too :D