Question

I wrote a poem... and it's a bit DEEP! but tell me what you think!?

Answer 1

I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.

Answer 2

Ohmigosh, this was too romantic. ~breathes heavily and touches neck~
I need to do this with Becca. ♥

Answer 3

Hahaha well thank you! :3

Answer 4

@AuroraB Thank you for getting him all lovey for me ._.
It's good btw.

Answer 5

A pleasure reading this wonderful gathering of words @AuroraB .

Answer 6

thats good

Answer 7

Hahahaha you're welcome! @beccaboo333 and pleasure? hehe

Answer 8

love it

Answer 9

<3 this it did get deep btw. ;} D

Answer 10

hahaha I told you!

Answer 11

I loved it :) great job!

Answer 12

too romantic *nose bleed*

Answer 13

It's amazing, because one it just is, and two, your repeat is just perfect, not to0 much, not too little. I loved how you reflected on everything at the end. Amazing!

Answer 14

Amazing! I wish i had that talent...

Answer 15

^^
it's Amazing!! And yeah, it did get deep! ;)

Answer 16

Omg, wow. It's amazing!!! Good Job!!! <3

Answer 17

♥ omg, I love it babe cx I wish I could write like you c:

Answer 18

@hba

Answer 19

Wow! Simply Amazing! The Flow was good, not too repetitive, and somewhat steamy :P

Answer 20

:} DD

Answer 21

I love that song u wrote

Answer 22

that song.... ? lol
but thanks! @retriceicker2014
this is my 'Poem' (btw)

Answer 23

...I like it deep. (._.)

Answer 24

I love it. It is the best poem I have ever head in my life.