Question

Can someone help revise my essay?

Answer 1

My teacher made the corrections I just have to fix it a little, this is my first time taking an online english class so I don't really understand anything.

Answer 2

Here it is.

Answer 3

Okay, thanks anyway :)

Answer 4

What do you need revised?

Answer 5

Well, My instructor already revised it, I just need to make the corrections. But I think I got it. Thank you.

Answer 6

You sure, cause im almost done and I think you'll like it

Answer 7

Okay, sure! Thanks for the help.

Answer 8

Okay, just give me a couple more minutes

Answer 9

Alright, Thank you so much.

Answer 10

Okay, tell me if that's better. I only changed the stuff in yellow, but I couldn't get the yellow away. What do you think?

Answer 11

Looks great! Thanks so much :)

Answer 12

No problem!