Can someone please help me fix this sentence? but I was to fascinated by the thought of playing chess through the television against my grandma using our remote control that I didn’t listen and just kept playing.

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Can someone please help me fix this sentence?


but I was to fascinated by the thought of playing chess through the television against my grandma using our remote control that I didn’t listen and just kept playing<6) run-on/see use of comma with coordinating conjunctions>.

anonymous · Answer

This one as well 

In my grandmas big oversized shirt and my hair all tangled I ran as fast as I could through our long dark hallway and to the kitchen to greet whoever was at the door.<7) great concrete sentence, but it is a run-on>