Is my poem good?
Today is sunny
There was a pile of leaves
I heard a child's grieves
What I saw was not funny
The leaves were red
The road was bumpy
The child did not understand what she perceives
So she misconceives
The wind was gusty
I saw how she dreds
Is it good?

Question

Is my poem good? 
Today is sunny
There was a pile of leaves
I heard a child's grieves
What I saw was not funny
The leaves were red
The road was bumpy
The child did not understand what she perceives
So she misconceives
The wind was gusty 
I saw how she dreds
Is it good?

poopsiedoodle · Answer

Not much meaning in it, and dreds should be dreads. We don't know why the kid is sad though.

j2lie · Answer

what does dreads mean?

poopsiedoodle · Answer

dread
/dred/
verb
3rd person present: dreads
1. Anticipate with great apprehension or fear.

j2lie · Answer

I thought it meant sadness