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OpenStudy (jadeishere):

Making a dent

OpenStudy (jadeishere):

Making a Dent I could just sit and watch the world go round Staying silent as others voice their own opinions Maybe watch the castle itself get crowned And as the queen gathers her minions But I won’t! That’s no longer an option for me! I tell myself “Just don’t” Knowing the Lord had walked on the sea. He walked with singing rocks And through the darkest trenches As the crowd around gathers and gawks And attempt to bring forth darling little wenches For he does not get tempted He was the one whom lived without a sin. We hear the saying “when pigs can fly” How about “When Jesus lives again” When trees move around like a spy And the sun turns to blue We will probably wonder and pray “Oh Heavens what will we do?”

OpenStudy (kewlgeek555):

~makes dent~ Powerfully moving.

OpenStudy (jadeishere):

I'm a bit religious, look at me 'school' there's 3 bands name in there. All Christian bands

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Good poem better than mine..

OpenStudy (jadeishere):

No, yours was good, just a different topic

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank yous! :} D

OpenStudy (jadeishere):

:)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

that is cool. it is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

OpenStudy (jadeishere):

thanks :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I really like this! I love the wording and the imagery (:

OpenStudy (jadeishere):

Thank you!! I had to express my beliefs for English. Welp, this is what I got

OpenStudy (secret66):

*innocent look* It's Awesome!!

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