Question

This is my 2nd poem! Rapunzel!

Answer 1

The walls of my tower
Get taller by the hour
Waiting for my Prince Charming
It is alarming
How long it is taking.
I am shaking
My fears take over
And then it is all over.
I have no chance
To dance
With the man of my dreams
I wish he could hear mt screams
I know there are plenty.
My mind is bending
My life is pending
Waiting for you to come
Then I will know you are the one.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

@Destinymasha

Answer 4

Tell me what you think please!

Answer 5

Awesome! You are a great Writer!!!! :D

Answer 6

:} DDD Thank you!

Answer 7

amazing :) @hba

Answer 8

I'd better take my eyes off --before I become even more jealous :D
-its awesome

Answer 9

:} DDDDDDD Ermigrd I can't believe that you like it!!!

Answer 10

@thomaster @TheCatMan

Answer 11

@GeekyChick

Answer 12

haha that was really good! and i LOVE RAPUNZEL OMG

Answer 13

:} D Love you girl!

Answer 14

@kawaiicat123

Answer 15

I love it :)

Answer 16

thank you :} DDDD

Answer 17

@justnick09

Answer 18

i like this one:) great job, it rhymed but you still kept a nice story

Answer 19

:} D thank yous!

Answer 20

good job

Answer 21

: *

Answer 22

you are an awesome writer i wish i could write like you.

Answer 23

You can do anything you set your mind to.

Answer 24

i know i have try to write songs and story and more but it never works

Answer 25

Do you want to read my book? I started to write it and I am starting on chapter 2.

Answer 26

no i do not think so

Answer 27

Okay sorry...

Answer 28

i was not being mean if that is what thinking if so i am sorry if that is what you were thinking

Answer 29

Tis alrite.. If you don't mind me asking why don't you wanna read it?

Answer 30

i have not seen it. i am new on here so if you can tell me and i could read it i just need to know the name of it

Answer 31

you and me should talk by message that why not every one can see what we are talking about

Answer 32

awesome can you look at my poem??

Answer 33

yes

Answer 34

ok be anent is is my first peom ever,
History is always a mystery who knows what you are going to learn in history is it a amazing subject. History should be everyones favorite subjects

Answer 35

ummmmmm do you want me to be completely honest?

Answer 36

yes

Answer 37

okay well that poem is very opinionated and.....what grade are you in before i go on?

Answer 38

I am in 7th grade but i have never done poems before so i can take anything

Answer 39

okay well first of all all poems should be posted in verse. and I think that 1/2 of the words in there are History..

Answer 40

kk

Answer 41

um could you retype it for me in verse it will be easier to read..

Answer 42

here,
History is always a mystery who knows what you are going to learn in history is it a amazing subject. History should be everyones favorite subjects

Answer 43

that isn't in verse let me do it for you:
History is always a mystery
Who knows what you are going to learn in History
It is an amazing subject.
History should be everyones favorite subjects.

Answer 44

oh ok thanks

Answer 45

yah so that is the definition of in verse what you did before was paragraph form..

Answer 46

anything else?

Answer 47

AND!!! you rhymed subject with subjects!

Answer 48

oh ok

Answer 49

can you do one that is cinderella when you get there?

Answer 50

sorry if I was being to hard on you but I think you can do better..

Answer 51

huh what was that last thing?

Answer 52

yea i know but i was ceryous because in history i got 2 place for best poem

Answer 53

that was all

Answer 54

what did you mean by 'can you do one that is cinderella when you get there?'?

Answer 55

When you write your next poem can it be cinderella?

Answer 56

is what i meant

Answer 57

I will try to come up with something..

Answer 58

ok great thanks for fixing mine

Answer 59

message me when you fix it tho!

Answer 60

kk

Answer 61

what school do you go to?

Answer 62

Penn Foster Homeschool.

Answer 63

i go to k12 online school

Answer 64

Cool how old are you?

Answer 65

do you know any chat sites and i am 10 and in 7th gras almost done with that you?

Answer 66

oh and you were not harsh at all

Answer 67

wow you are farther ahead than me..I am 14 and in 11th grade.

Answer 68

:} D

Answer 69

do you low any chat sites so we can get to know each other?

Answer 70

no but we can message on OS.

Answer 71

yea we can let me google it