Question

My little sister wrote this poem and she wanted to know what my internet friends think about it.

Answer 1

The posters on my wall
Are like the guards of the secret
I don't know how they keep it
But with each day
They get further away
And suddenly I am alone
With no one in my home
I wish for a day
I could go away
But when I leave
They will come
And I will never be free.

Answer 2

@ChipperJay* @Destinymasha @csscgirl @madeline.grey @GeekyChick @justnick09 @wolfe8 @thomaster

Answer 3

umm im kinda confused about her intent on this poem

Answer 4

O.o It's kinda anticlimatic. I thought the posters would be the friend that stays.

Answer 5

Yah sooo....it doesn't make since..

Answer 6

@Warriorslayer

Answer 7

well it starts w how the posters keep her secrets so there her guards but then she becomes alone so i was confused
nice rhym scheme though

Answer 8

Thanks.

Answer 9

it sounds nice --

Answer 10

besides that

Answer 11

its ok

Answer 12

To me it only does if I break it into parts. Maybe the second 'they' in the poem refers to the people who come at the end?

Answer 13

Whatever you say..

Answer 14

it is just a random poem it wasn't even relivent to anything

Answer 15

Well writing-wise it's good. I just don't get the message. You asked for opinion O.o Maybe if you tell us what she meant then it'd be clear

Answer 16

>.<

Answer 17

there was no point to the poem if she writes another one it will have a point so she doesn't confuse everyone.

Answer 18

Haha ok. Well tell her she's good at writing. :)

Answer 19

She says thanx.

Answer 20

wolfe how get to a 96 so quick

Answer 21

Yah I was wondering that too.

Answer 22

hehe

Answer 23

Tell her she's welcome.

It took me 162 days and 2218 questions. And lots of medals.

Answer 24

Sounds like alote of work..

Answer 25

It is