Question

My third Poem Cinderella:

Answer 1

I spend all day cleaning
In my mind I am dreaming
Of a day
When I can say,
"I am free from my mother"
I have no other
Since my father died
Now there is no one to guide
My ever wandering thoughts
My heart is tied into knots

I can't help but to think
How my life would be
If my dad were here
And I didn't live my life in fear
How can I stay much longer
My chores take control and and I'm all alone
But secretly my mind wanders free
Just to wake the next day
And my Fairytail is over
A new day awaits
As the guards open up the gates.

Answer 2

I wrote the 1st half and my lil sis wrote the 2nd.

Answer 3

how old is you little sister

Answer 4

@jennaknight03 @Destinymasha @jigglypuff314 @kawaiicat123
13 years old

Answer 5

That's good!!!!! it's sweet yet sad...
but in a joyful way!
Ya know?? lol

Answer 6

Ha lol good to know.

Answer 7

that is very good you both are very talented.

Answer 8

she says yay!

Answer 9

all of your poems are good even though you have three they are all very good

Answer 10

:} D

Answer 11

@wolfe8 @thomaster @rareexoticflower

Answer 12

@madeline.grey

Answer 13

It's really good! :)

Answer 14

:} D thank you I treasure all of your opinions!

Answer 15

@jennaknight03 @jennaknight03

Answer 16

this is awesome thanks

Answer 17

your welcome! In case anyone was wondering I wrote this for @jennaknight03

Answer 18

and the best person for doing this so quick is @orion92898

Answer 19

:} D yw.

Answer 20

Does anyone else have a request for a poem?

Answer 21

nope

Answer 22

Alrite if you think of one you know where to find me.

Answer 23

kk

Answer 24

@ChipperJay* @FlvsGirl

Answer 25

Wow, this is really good. I can relate to this poem in a way.^ You two are very talented :)

Answer 26

thank you! gtg take a shower real kwic so do you have any ideas for poem's

Answer 27

um now you r talking to my lil sis riley

Answer 28

you guy did a good job

Answer 29

thx mm Orion isn't on this is her sister Riley

Answer 30

I am on until she comes back

Answer 31

u there?

Answer 32

Yeah^ :)

Answer 33

ok hey

Answer 34

I don't know what ideas I should give you. You could write about being underwater, waking up, a bad dream, an important decision you made, how people see you, birthdays, family or friends... that's on the top of my head :)

Answer 35

do you want me to write YOU a poem?

Answer 36

Yeah, do that! xD

Answer 37

guten Tag

Answer 38

wie geht es dir heute

Answer 39

ok

Answer 40

was heute geht

Answer 41

i am trying to speak german

Answer 42

*thumbs up*

Answer 43

tym

Answer 44

nicht mehr Deutsch?

Answer 45

really nice..

Answer 46

Damn! Are you a poet?!? That's Awesome!! :D

Answer 47

I have a poem request.. A poem for shaking your past and looking forward towards a new and better future. Losing family to gain family and it being for the better. :D

Answer 48

Okay I will see what I can do..

Answer 49

:} D

Answer 50

That was amazing. You guys are really talented :3

Answer 51

O_O wow

Answer 52

:} DDDD Thank yous!!!!

Answer 53

did you ever figure out the poem?

Answer 54

like a lil... wan me to post the 1st half?

Answer 55

sure

Answer 56

I sent it to you..

Answer 57

aww this is so good!

Answer 58

Thank you!

Answer 59

...omg...that is so good

Answer 60

I agree

Answer 61

really? Thank you.. My professional writer friend and my jerk sister were critiquing every lil thing I was angry with them because you are supposed to just read and enjoy.

Answer 62

it is ok I am treated like that every day :(

Answer 63

@cakt07 This is one of my works of art.

Answer 64

Cool

Answer 65

Do you like poetry?

Answer 66

Yush,

Answer 67

okay.. well what did you like about it?

Answer 68

The rhythym

Answer 69

okay :} D tym.

Answer 70

why are u not offline what happened?

Answer 71

dad is at work couldn't resist.

Answer 72

oh ok

Answer 73

i adore reading your poems! @orion92898
you've got a gift for this stuff girl :)

Answer 74

<3 you too thank you!

Answer 75

I loved it, wow so awesome!

Answer 76

:} D Thank you!