Is this a complete thought/sentence? Does there need to be anything added or subtracted?:

His perspective on life is that respecting something with rapture and prettiness, such as the river, could impact your view on other people for example.

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Is this a complete thought/sentence? Does there need to be anything added or subtracted?:

His perspective on life is that respecting something with rapture and prettiness, such as the river, could impact your view on other people for example.

firejay5 · Answer

@Destinymasha

destinymasha · Answer

it sounds complete to me

firejay5 · Answer

no semicolons or anything is it a fragment or run-on. @Destinymasha

destinymasha · Answer

@Firejay5  maybe take out the ''for example'' ?

texaschic101 · Answer

thats what I would do...take out the " for example ".