please tell me what you think its only the intro help me figure out the rest

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you might think that being in high school is a dream. You hear stories about finding love or about finding a best friend. About experiencing things that will stay with you forever and even change you. My name is Stephanie Volcano, a junior at Anchor Beach High in California.My story has every thing you dreamed high school would be about love,a best friend and a haunting story that will stay with me forever. Her name… is Sophie.

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please tell me what you think its only the intro help me figure out the rest

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you might think that being in high school is a dream. You hear stories about finding love or about finding a best friend. About experiencing things that will stay with you forever and even change you. My name is Stephanie Volcano, a junior at Anchor Beach High in California.My story has every thing you dreamed high school would be about love,a best friend and a haunting story that will stay with me forever. Her name… is Sophie.

anonymous · Answer

what kind of essay is it and is it for school?

anonymous · Answer

@clarkydances its a short story for gifted

anonymous · Answer

ok... It sounds actually pretty good... But I know teachers don't like when a person puts "...". I know, I know, its really stupid for them to think that but they just don't like it (even though it adds more drama).

anonymous · Answer

First I think u should talk about how you met sophie, then about how yall grew close, then the "haunting story". and then what it is like for you and sophie today

anonymous · Answer

thanks @clarkydances