Question

is this a good expository thesis statement?
"According to a recent research made during the 2002 – 2003 school year students between the ages of 6 – 17 years old are doing twice as more homework than during the 1981 – 1982 school year."

Answer 1

yep if a thesis starts with such statistics like such, you'll be on the right track :)

Answer 2

thank you(:

Answer 3

can you please medal me?